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Her hand goes over the poison and shields herself into the night.
The same smile is placed on her, laughter giving her away. She takes
her hands and creates a massacre, one only she knows. Corpses will
be her dolls. They rise only for her.


The young boy watches as flames engulf the body. He screams in horror,
desperately trying to save his playmate. She reaches out, but it was
already too late. The last thing he remembers was the tears that fall
from his eyes, and the heart that was broken into two.


His lover falls to the ground, blood splattering on her clothes.
Barely alive, she collapses onto his own arms. They grab her by the
throat. The others held him down, and he watched as she be publicly
executed by the classmates she laughed with. His cries couldn't reach
her. They were too quiet.


His hand goes over hers, begging her to stay alive. She smiles, the
same one she uses to tear him apart over and over again. Death seperates
them forever. But it doesn't matter.

She's already died three times

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I got the idea long ago after listening to Within Temptation's song, "Angels." There are three times the girl dies, like the three choruses that say "The smile when you tore me apart." One of my favorite songs, love it, love it, love it. <3
This is another segment to the "Tear the World Down" flash stories, so I hope you like it.



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Mood: Wow! ~Oumagadoki7 Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're a great poet, you know that? AMAZED ^^
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~forsakenthedawn Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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~MangaandAnimeLuver Jul 12, 2012  Student Writer
Amazing
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~forsakenthedawn Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank u
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~MangaandAnimeLuver Jul 13, 2012  Student Writer
You are welcome!!!!!
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!lussenhoff Jul 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Great words ~
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~forsakenthedawn Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank u
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